I really like the font style and balance you have going between Murky and the words and then Fillydelphia in the background. I think this sketch alone is particularly powerful, I almost can't help imagining it in color. It looks great
Wow. Feels. You really managed to grab them here, even for me!
You really grabbed that sort of explosion of emotion into a huge scream from the rooftops idea I had going on for this scene, that's such cool work to lift it right out of my head and my words like that! I love how mangled you make his fleece look, especially given how long since he repaired it.
Thank you so much for doing this, it's one of my favourite scenes to write so seeing someone moved enough to draw something from it feels incredible. Thank you!